25 October 2011

Linking to others blogs


To Rachel Thomas:

Hi Rachel,
I love how you have shown pictures of the environment you are working in really helped set the scene. I also like how you included the Eriksons life stages within your post as it relates well to your story. Maybe explaining ergonomics in your own words at the beggining as well as the quote would have been helpful but other than that i have really enjoyed your blog, good work :)

To Merryn:

This is awesome Merryn i love the use of the Ray Charles quote it is perfect for describing your 'need' for the activity and links in really well. I think your blog is great, maybe you could put up a video or a recording of one of your jam sessions? it would be awesome to here and make for an exciting blog!!

:)

To Heath:

Hi Heath,
really interesting blog, can tell you are very passionate about rugby which makes your blog easy to read. Bet you would have had an enjoyable Sunday night watching the All Blacks win eh! Maybe you could go a bit further with how having your dad at your games makes you feel? But other than that really good work on your blog :)

To Rachael:

Hi Rachael,
Your blog is very enjoyable to read, i had never heard of french knitting before but you make it sound very interesting and a great way to fill in any spare time. Perhaps linking this post to a story would have been interesting but other than that your blog is really good and such an easy read :)
good work

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